Tuesday, July 16, 2024

That warning voice January 20, 2014

 

She posted a new poem that might possibly be a response to something I posted yesterday, about not getting what she wanted, but rather what she deserves.

Her poem retraces steps she’s already taken before about not wishing to have come down this path, and has the uncomfortable undertones of her trickle up poem – but not so acute.

The poem talks about missed opportunities, things that escaped her, while she was busy doing other things.

Paraphrasing, there comes in the shaken rafters a tiny sound, a warning that came at a time when she did not hear it, and somewhere inside her, it wandered around the years of failure, a wake-up call, which she clearly missed, other things downing out the sound and her ability to perceive it, and what she still wanted, but gone due to fear.

Somewhere over the long years, she must have warned herself to change the course of her life, and she intended to, but that voice of warning got lost in the greater din – some of which was fear.

While she continued to want salvation or another direction, she seems to be saying that she was consumed by the dread of what might happen if she did.

The use of the word of “insular” in her defeats also implies distraction, a narrow mindedness and inward looking perspective on her part.

The poem is more than a little sad because it implies that behind all the masks she wears, she is a person perfectly aware of who she is and what she has become and what he is doing, and feels trapped doing anything else.

This poem comes at a time when she has takend pause again, and thought she might save herself, but seems to have gotten scared and goes back and started back up the life she feels most comfortably living, and so, she reponed her Facebook pae, and began once more to post photos.

While she isn’t opening this totally to unfriendly eyes (such as mine), she seems determined to reach out to people she can keep on keeping on.

From the start, she’s understood what we (I mean the collective) need, and how we continue to need her, and she gives us superficial gifts suited to each of us, feeding our former temporary boss’ ego, our owner’s lust and others. We all continue to trail behind her, like broken crockery, we all hoping somehow she can put us back together again, when she can’t.

She can’t even put the pieces of her own life together.

Looking back, she realizes there were warnings she might have heeded had she not been consumed with her fear of things, fear of change, and finds herself trapped in her own life.

 


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